Well, sorry, I can only write corrections for what's actually said, not what isn't said. You're still welcome to write a letter to the editor.
So, Ryuko was a born troublemaker, the rejected half of a pair of siblings, the other whom you had already swore your devotion to? Sounds like there might be a jealousy angle. Any comment there?
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So, Ryuko was a born troublemaker, the rejected half of a pair of siblings, the other whom you had already swore your devotion to? Sounds like there might be a jealousy angle. Any comment there?